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Critiques [Translate]

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• ribeiroantonio (16588)
• [2008-07-31 20:59]

I like the name of the pharmacy as it shows well how religious the people is. The strong red colour is very nice and combines with the lady skirt! The only minor issue is the fact you cropped her feet.
Antonio.

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• eversmile (2468)
• [2008-07-31 22:44]
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Hi Joel,

I like your composition, how you captured the woman just when she appeared in the light, with her skirt matching with the color of the wall. Even the horizontal line behind her seems to be a repetition of the braces of her tee-shirt. The colors are bright and I thing it is a good idea to have included the shop's name in the picture. Actually, I wonder if the name could be a pun, playing on the close relation between "pastor" and the name of Luis Pasteur (who worked on the vaccine for rabies, whose name has also been used to create the terminology "pasteurization")?
The only small thing that bothers me, like for Antonio, is the fact that her feet are out of the frame.
Regards
Marine

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• terminus (539)
• [2008-08-17 6:01]

Hi Joel,
very nice shot, i like the colors a lot. The give the idea of how hot it must be there too. Yes you cropped the lady's feet, but I think, maybe, you had to choose between her feet or the name of the farmacia.
TFS, Rafa.