gohar tappeh

Critiques [Translate]

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• PTAH (281)
• [2006-11-22 20:26]

I am glad to be welcoming you to the Trek Earth!

About the image:
Looks like they had pretty good ceramics technique back then!
The image looks interesting and intriguing to feel how little has actually changed in human mind over the thousands of years.
Yet, I would try to improve the look of the picture itself by increasing the sharpness, cutting the edges, where we see an unwelcomly contrasting and eye attracting black gap on the left and a shadow cast by an unknown object on the top left corner.
Finally, I think you should try to make the text included in the picture more blending together, not so outstanding. Maybe you could leave out the location information as this is already shown above the photo in the page and write the link in your member intro page.
See this picture for an instance of framing and including text to the picture:
www.trekearth.com/gallery/Europe/Lithuania/photo117395.htm

Good luck!

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• stranger (707)
• [2006-11-24 8:39]

welcome to TE ....

Shocking Shot :-) I love it , even being not sharp enough has made it look more older ... :-)

TFS,

Shahab,