Photographer’s Note
"Copyright © – Attila Szili.
The reproduction, publication, modification, transmission or exploitation of any work contained herein for any use, personal or commercial, without my prior written permission is strictly prohibited. All rights reserved."
Taken in Shazdeh Garden (Prince Garden) in Mahan located at 40 kms from the city of Kerman.
It was constructed at the end of Qajar era (19th century) and was used as the summer palace of Prince Abdul Hussein Farmanfarma. The irrigation system and the small pools built inside the garden which are designed in a way to look like a staircase are its unique and valuable characteristics.
The two girls took part of a female group of students from Shiraz and in visit to the city of Kerman and its surroundings.
To enhance the "mystic" atmosphere, I applied a so called "midnight sepia" filter in pp which added some blur effect, desaturated and darkened a bit.
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efigesta
(12181) 2006-08-11 4:50
Hi Szilli
perfect portrait here, great exposition and nice colors
regards
manuel
tcht
(7298) 2006-08-11 4:59
Hello Szili,
This is an amazing portrait from a country like Iran, I believe that the girls usually cover their face. The PP treatment is nicely done enhnacing the atmosphere caused by her stare. I prefer the colour version as it's more balanced.
Regards,
Cheuk Hin
Gerrit
(35937) 2006-08-11 5:25
Hi Attila,
very strong double portrait with great intensity and perfect framing.
The colour effect works fine.
regards, Gerrit
syd1946
(17931) 2006-08-11 5:32
Hello Attila,
Excellent portrait for this woman.The tone color is just amazing and the only two colors of the image gives power to the scene you captured!Great work!
Greetings,
Thomas
alekpet
(4659) 2006-08-11 5:32
Hi Szili.
They were not so confidential after all, if you have managed to make such a closeup. Who knows, aybe they were talking about you! I like both versions, the filter obviously works well for portraits.
have a nice weekend, Aleks
izmirli
(3223) 2006-08-11 6:13
merhaba my friend attila
beautiful portrait picture.very good eyes.very good Iran girls.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.
Albrecht
(11155) 2006-08-11 6:21
Hi Szili
A wonderful soft portrait; I like the atmosphere and the place of the face in the frame. Well done.
greetings Albrecht
Albanian
(248) 2006-08-11 6:41
Szia Attila!
Nagyon jo portarit :)
Excellent composition and tones. The look in the eyes is ovepowering and I like that you included some of the other lady in the shot.
Excellent...viszonlatasra :)
Bekim
maki
(0) 2006-08-11 7:34
Hi Attila,
This is marvelous double portrait and great moment. I like Your title - good idea for this scene, it works great together...
So, this is IMO one of Your's best, thats exactly something telling a story about a place, culture, time...
regards,
maki
papagolf21
(56483) 2006-08-11 8:57
Bonjour mon ami Attila,
J'aime ce portrait des deux jeunes femmes qui se confient. Le cadrage est parfait pour exprimer leur sentiment.
Les deux photos sont bonnes.
Portrait trčs original.
Bravo !
Amitiés.
Philippe
t0mmm1
(5434) 2006-08-11 9:47
Ciao Szili,
bellissima la foto. Si vede proprio che si dividono le confidenze e come sta ascoltando l'altra ragazza... Bello, e mi sento anche un po complice di questa facenda.
Ciao,
Tomi
tjanze
(5674) 2006-08-11 10:31
Hi Szili!
You soften a lot,but I like it.Lovely face with those big black eyes.Amazing deep look.Good light and composition. Have a nice wekend!
Graal
(58267) 2006-08-11 14:15
Jó estet Attila,
very nice soft focus, good composition and delicacy colours. I like this portraits. Good work.
Rgs, Aleksander
Budapestman
(42328) 2006-08-11 16:17
Szia Attila!
Fantasztikus eszközökkel sikerült bemutatnod ennek a bizalmas beszélgetésnek a hangulatát! Nem tudom, miben gyönyörködjek előbb: a kép hangulatában vagy az eszközökben, amivel elérted ezt a gyönyörű hatást! Ahogyan bemutatod a sötétlő ruhákkal keretezett fehéren tündöklő és merengő arcokat, az külön fejezet érdemel a kép pozitívumainak méltatásában! A szemből látható női arc elgondolkozó és merengő arckifejezését, tekintetének fátyolos vibrálását mesterien kaptad el! A jobbról hozzáhajoló fehérlő profil képbe-komponálásával a bensőségességet és az intimitást gyönyörűen sikerült bemutatnod! A kép erényeire a „midnight sepia” technikájával tetted fel a koronát: ez egy tökéletes kép! Kissé fáradtan, de remélem sikerült elmondanom és érzékeltetnem, mennyire tetszik a fotód! Gratulálok, és külön pontok az érzékenységért, amivel a témát kezelted! Csodálatos munka!
További szép képeket és napokat!
Gyuri
Dragonheart
(8393) 2006-08-12 3:35
Hi Attila,
Excellent portrait, I like the expression on the women face, excellent framing and good control of lights.
Well done
Thanks for sharing
Regards
Vivek
veronika
(6022) 2006-08-12 9:37
Hi Attila,
what a nice double portrait, with very mystical and silent atmosphere, i like it!
Vero (be back)
A nice day :)
jhm
(82879) 2006-08-12 11:34
Hi Szili,
Portraits is not my speciality, I find your contrast very well maybe the nose a little bit overexposed, and the eyes something a few sharpness, for my this difficult!
Thanks for sharing.
Have a nice weekend,
John
veve
(4149) 2006-08-12 12:39
Hi Attila!
A very good portrait!
This blur works excellent here!
A really nice work!
Kellemes estet!
Veronica
AmiBe
(6042) 2006-08-12 12:47
Hi Attila,
good PP for this portrait, I like the mysterious atmosphere.
Maybe the second face is too much cut ?
The color version is better for me.
Good title, well done
goodwill
(4029) 2006-08-12 13:39
Salam Szili,
To me this si the finest specimen of cropping; cropping delibrately to achieve the results.
Your focus on the eyes infront and the lips on the right side brings the perspective.
A master piece in itself.
Greetings from India,
Rajeev
Cricri
(43304) 2006-08-12 13:57
Bonsoir Attila,
Merveilleux double portrait de ses deux femmes, étrange et mystérieuse, belle lumiére
compliment
bonne soirée
cricri
russte
(0) 2006-08-12 16:21
Hi Szili, you have caught the conspiritorial atmosphere between these two people very well. My only temptation would have been to sharpen her eyes to make a definite focal point. But it is a very good photograph. Stephen
Vato_Law
(11682) 2006-08-12 18:47
Hello Attila,
Great portrait you present here! Tjis dreamy effect adds a lot to the image's atmosphere. I like the expression on both of them faces, just like they were conspirating.
Great work!
Rgds.
Paulo
leo61
(43438) 2006-08-13 2:35
Hi Attila!
Verry nice double portrait,with great intensity and a nice atmosphere.The blur is verry nice here and I like the way how she looks to your camera.
Regards,Leo
cunejo200
(7193) 2006-08-13 7:25
Hi Szili,
Excellent double portrait. The subjects look so intense, they are also very beautiful. Good framing and colors. Best wishes.
Danilo
Mistral
(13694) 2006-08-13 13:04
Complimenti Attila,
davvero una bella immagine composta in modo magistrale!
Bellissimi gli sguardi delle ragazze che rispecchiano pienamente il tuo appropriato titolo.
Bravo (4000 volte)!
Luca
paura
(38742) 2006-08-13 14:19
Attila,
what a wonderful expression she has!
Nice, clear and detailed image with a great DOF.
Paulo
TeresaT
(10733) 2006-08-13 17:19
Hello Attila,
Great portrait with a perfect crop, colours and light.
You've captured very well the woman expression's.
I like the PP you made with this one.
regards
Teresa
Scharan
(13955) 2006-08-13 21:53
Olá Szili
Lindo retrato, expressăo forte, marcante; cores e composiçăo excelentes.
Parabéns pelo trabalho maravilhoso; vocę tem fotos lindas.
Abraços,
Vera.
alana
(2607) 2006-08-13 23:05
Hello, Attila
I like the title, a double portrait presentation, excellent PP treatment, colors tone and a contrast, and an amazing look and eyes... Great job as always, Attila
**Alana**
Angshu
(33877) 2006-08-13 23:39
Hi Attila
This is excellent…wonderful double portrait accentuated by your PP work. Beautiful framing to keep the subjects to the right & the open space to the left. Large beautiful eyes staring through you.
Regards
Angshu
saamb
(1004) 2006-08-14 2:47
Szili,
thanks for good note and beautiful portrait. you have shown a persian girl pretty. in a excellent frame. tnx
SAAM
riclopes
(33043) 2006-08-14 7:15
Hi Attila,
A powerful portrait with great intensity. The second girl on the corner is a superb addition and so important for the message of the title. Without her this would be a completely diferent image. Excellent work!
Best regards,
Ricardo
maximage
(13490) 2006-08-14 8:00
Bonjour Szilli,
Une image fascinante, presque inquiétante de ces deux jeunes et jolies femmes qui semblent porter sur leur visage en męme temps la vitalité et l'insouciance de la jeunesse, mais aussi, tout le poids "du systčme" Iranien!
Trčs beau portrait, félicitation pour cette émotion.
Amitiés.
max
nika
(0) 2006-08-14 10:18
Szia Atus!
Fantasztikusan elkapott,gyonyoru pillanat. Ezek azok a kepek, amiket igazan tetszenek! A lany tekintete sokatmondo, valoban nagyon nagy bizalamt arszat. Tetszik, hogy a kepbe belevetted a lany beszelo partneret is. Igy teljes a foto!
A szepiavaltozat nekem szemelyesen jobban tetszik, melegebb tonusaival kifejezobbe valik a lany odaado, erdeklodo hallgatasa.
Huu...mennyi dolgot osszehordtam itt neked.
puszi es nagyon szep napot neked!
Anette
CRATEOS
(7274) 2006-08-14 13:59
your portraits in africa or in asia or every weare they have something to tell...this face tell us a story a big story...and you catcet perfectly...many RGRDS my frend..see you soon...Nikiforos
Giorgio
(8730) 2006-08-15 2:22
- Excellent framing for this double amazing portrait, very good composition, well done!
giorgio
josepmarin
(33861) 2006-08-15 7:01
Hi Attila,
The glance of these great and beautiful black eyes is impressive. I like the atmosphere that you have given to the photo in PP, it creates a a little mysterious sensation, and you have given a very interesting dark tones him, that they are able to emphasize much the pale tone of the skin of the girls in contrast to its so dark clothes.
Very good photo, my friend.
Regards,
Josep
balatrek
(7419) 2006-08-15 11:54
Hi Attila,
You show us a lovely photo, the composition is very creativity, soft textures and beautiful colours, congratulations.
Regards
José
isabela_sor
(42215) 2006-08-15 12:09
In this picture is something...I do not know to describe in words..woman's look and her portrait are so enigmatic!This one is going to my favorites
Thank you
All the best
Isabela
siolaw
(25794) 2006-08-15 13:48
Hi Attila,
A strong double portrait, with excellent compo and framing, strong athmosphere, i wish it was a bit sharper on the girl facing us
Very well seen anyway!
Laurent
cjmm
(4019) 2006-08-15 17:10
Hi Szili,
I like very much this portrait (the tittle fits also very well), and find the composition and framing really outstanding.
I also like very much the pp. It enhanced the strength of the image.
Well done!
Kind regards, saludos,
Carlos
sabyasachi1212
(19546) 2006-08-16 4:11
Hi Szili,
Excellent composition, just perfect for sepia. I like it better than the WS. She certainly has a very intense look. Great portrait.
With Greetings from India
Sabyasachi
kermit350
(8988) 2006-08-16 6:11
Hello Attila, Splendid portrait with beautiful colors with the tone pastel and this challenging glance with wish. The expression of the eyes gives to this image a great dimension, sincerely Amicalement.
rahul__rahul__
(2250) 2006-08-16 16:30
Hi Szili
nice picture, I like this portrait and the tone is very nice. I like the blurred background and person on the right/.
Good job
TFS
Rahul
rosaline
(0) 2006-08-18 4:25
Hi Szili
Nice portrait and a good, close up shot with the guy to the edge of the frame. This gives a good compositional feeling to the scene and some narrative too. I'm not sure about the sepia filter blurr, as I find it a bit too blurry; but the overall effect and mystic atmopshere is brilliant. Very creative, imaginative, and well done.
Cheers
Aubrey
lestans
(15474) 2006-08-21 4:22
Bellissimo ritratto!! Che occhi profondi, che atmosfera! Quanto bene hai fatto ad andare in Iran!
Livia
MIG13
(0) 2006-08-21 20:48
Hi, Attila! It's hard to see pics of Arab or Iranian women, and you've done a nice work. "Confidentially" is a good name for it, 'cause that's the "mood" captured in your shot. TFS! Greetings from Rio! Miguel.
AiresSantos
(42440) 2006-08-22 3:08
Hi Attila,
Magnificent portrait with great colors and tones.
Very well captured and framed.
Thanks for aharing my friend
sergio1
(12150) 2006-08-22 5:06
Hi Friend
Lovely portrait to woman. I like the framing and focus.
Your note is very nice too.
Sergio
Emile
(20017) 2006-08-22 11:05
Hola Attila.
Very good portrait with great intensity of attention on her expression, the "midnight sepia" filter worked very well. The color effect is better in this shot compared with the B&W version.
Well done. TFS.
berek
(28937) 2006-08-23 4:45
Hi Attila,
I love this one. its incredible . I just say about this double portrait great my friend.
Berek
my overall evaluation -> :-)))
prezntime
(3945) 2006-09-05 6:51
Greetings Attila.
What an incredible portrait. The moment is spectacular with the young woman caught in the moment of secrecy. What stunning beauty the forward facing girl has with such deep black eyes...incredibly expressive. Wonderful use of the filter in PP with her face standing out so well from the black covering. Absolutly stunning.
Best wishes,
Chris.
:) out, will be back.
Yar
(795) 2006-10-08 14:34 [Comment]
siamakjafari
(1345) 2006-10-16 6:03 [Comment]
sid
(228) 2006-11-07 6:11
Hi Szili,
What a lovely pic is this. Besides post processing its a lovely composition with a nice pov and framing added alongwith other post processing.
But what is PP? ..is it Photoshop that you added the effects from?
Cheers
Sid
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Baileys
(677) 2006-11-12 15:47
Hallo, just found your gallery with so many beautiful images! This portrait is really stunning. Her eyes are so expressive and your pp wonderfuly enhances the effect of mystic atmosphere.
Great work.
Regards, Hanna
nbj
(1871) 2006-11-16 12:09
amazing softness, colors and light. i love the sensitive and respectful treatment of the objects. very beautiful.
henrytf
(977) 2006-11-21 17:05
Hello attila
This is the kind of photograph that you remember for a long time. It is superb. I generally prefer pin sharp portraits but this one has so much strength.
The intensity of the look must play a great part.
Congratulations for the treatment, it's great art.
Friendly greetings
Henry
rafid76
(2611) 2006-11-29 16:04
i love what you did here. your work is very unique. it must feel nice to get over 100 points /picture. i struggle to get 6 points and if i do im happy :)
this image shows the beauty of the people of iran, even with the veil. great IMAGE
pinakie_slg
(835) 2007-03-04 21:22
the more i come across iranian ladies i get suprised. how can all of them be soooooo beautiful. great catch friend. thanks for sharing.
MichaelTrezzi
(3170) 2007-03-22 2:54
Hi Attila, very strong and mysterious portrait. Like the out of center position of the woman and the fact, that the second one is just an undefined feeling of another person, which leaves enough space for fantasy. Tranks for sharing. Cheers, Michael
noborders
(14199) 2007-05-18 8:35
Amazing interpretation of a subject that I saw often (having travelled 3 times in Iran) - I would never have thought of taking such a photo, and you have transformed it into a sort of beautiful pastel painting, emphasizing the intense look of the girl...
Congratulations,
Cath.
Jakab
(3472) 2007-09-25 16:09
Szia Attila!
Érdekes kép. Szerintem a PP-vel nem igazán misztikussá, inkább sejtelmessé tetted a hangulatát, de csak annyira, amennyire minden női tekintet sejtelmessé válhat. Nekem igazából az a meglepetés benne, hogy hiányzik az egzotikum. Az jut eszembe róla, amit Heller Ágnes mondott, hogy ugyanis az irániak sokkal közelebb vannak hozzánk, mint azt mi gondoljuk. Akár görögök is lehetnének. Ettől a szempártól mindenesetre nehéz szabadulni.
Ja, és persze itt is kipróbáltam az új játékszeremet, nem mintha szükség lenne rá - de talán nem bánod, hogy elküldöm WS-ben.
Üdv
Laci
daddo
(11381) 2007-11-20 15:01
Zdsravo Attila. The power of that look- one feels as if one is drowning in pools of black.The treatment you gave the original shot has produced a wonderful softness and a haunting beauty. The inclusion of the othere woman provides us with a nice context, rather than just have a solitary woman staring or lost in thoughts. Prekrasno prijatelju.Pozdrav. Klaudio.
sn00zie
(2384) 2008-05-04 10:28
WOW! one of the most attractive and expressive eyes ever..
beautiful capture. tfs
brandstaetter
(14242) 2008-07-02 3:10
Ciao Attila,
quella ho trovato sulla pagina prima di TE. Una scena molto intensa, con tanta espressione. La foto racconta una storia completa.
Complimenti, ti invidio a questo viaggio :)
Ciao christian
Photo Information
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Copyright: Attila Szili (atus)
(15476) - Genre: Gente
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2006-04-20
- Categories: Momento Irrepetible
- Camera: Nikon D70, Sigma 70-300mm 1:4-5.6D APO Macro Super, Tamron 58mm UV
- Exposición: f/5.6, 1/100 segundos
- More Photo Info: view
- Versión de la foto: Versión original, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2006-08-11 4:39
- Favoritos: 5 [Ver]
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