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Sloterdijk


Sloterdijk
Información de la foto
Copyright: Lars Zwemmer (Tue) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5185 W: 56 N: 7468] (24032)
Género: Lugares
Medio: Color
Tomada el: 2005-01-09
Categorías: Transportes
Cámara: Canon Powershot A75
Exposición: f/2.8, 1/8 segundos
Versión de la foto: Versión original
Fecha enviada: 2005-01-09 17:48
Vista: 784
Puntos: 10
[Normas para las notas] Notas del fotógrafo
This is another picture of the Railway-Station Amsterdam Sloterdijk, but today I didn't only pass the station, I had to wait there as well. But again after having visisted a friend.

Amsterdam Sloterdijk is a junction for trains. When you are in the Central Hall (where I took this picture) there are train beneath your feet,(you can see them here ), driving from Amsterdam Central Station to my hometown Haarlem and there are trains above your head, driving from Amsterdam Central Station to Schiphol Airport. But you can only see the trains to Schiphol from the Central Hall, as you can see on my picture.

I took this picture late in the evening, so it was a quiet place, there were only a couple of guards.
After having travelled away from Sloterdijk, I came home, where I cropped this picture a little bit.
SylFondacci, kent_s, Galmeida, Hauke ha puntuado esta nota como útil.
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Nice framing and composition but a lack of sharpness.
Sylvie

Well Lars. This one seems a little blurry to me. I guess it's taken without any form of tripod. Also the moving train gives it hard to get the neccesary sharp in this pic.
Otherwise so is the idea great and the compo good

  • Great 
  • Steft Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1350 W: 131 N: 1574] (5958)
  • [2005-01-11 8:14]

Hi Lars,
Nice picture, but yes... it's a bit unsharp/undetailed. But I like the compostion with the train on the top of the picture. (I will try a ws when I have more time).

I like and is interesting this composition with the train passing above our heads! Good perspective, colors, light, but it needed more sharpness. Never mind, you do in the next shot. Congratulations.

  • Good 
  • Hauke Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 168 W: 11 N: 1] (2)
  • [2005-01-12 14:11]

I have to agree with the others, fine compo, good colours and shape, but lack of sharpness and blurred. You can manage this in a better way, I do know that and you even know that I do know ;-)

  • Great 
  • Stepan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5256 W: 95 N: 4055] (26963)
  • [2005-05-24 16:03]

I like the idea, I like the title, I like the way you composed it !
Stéphane

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