spring light

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• ChrisJ (57261)
• [2006-05-03 20:42]

Hi Asana

I like the meandering stream, which leads the eye back into the photo, & adds depth. The snowcapped mountains are magificent. Tfs!

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• weswang (18223)
• [2006-05-03 21:58]

Hi Asana, A nice shot of the beautiful scenery. You have well made use of the light to highlight the window of the blue sky and the patches of green valley. The zigzag small river and the power line towers link the foreground mountain and to snow peak. A well composed picture with nice contrast and depth. Thanks for sharing.

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• amirett (43)
• [2006-05-04 0:50]

salam . zaaviyeh negaahet kheyli aaliyeh vali contrastesh yeh kam ziyaadiyeh . movaffagh baaashi

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• macondo (9367)
• [2006-05-04 3:50]

A patch of blue sky, and a patch of sunlight on the grass. Actually the subdued colour and the shade are very effective in creating a sense of the remoteness of this place. That looks like an animal enclosure within that fence, and I wonder what animals are kept in this region so high up. You adopted a very good viewpoint up this valley with the creek running through it, perhaps the result of melting snow. I am amazed at the scenery in your country.
Regards,
Andrew

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• babakhendi (190)
• [2006-05-04 4:18]
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Dorood Bar shoma
Intori minevisam ke rahat bekhoni o manzoramo rahat bayan konam. bebin asana khanom yek chizi ke az aksaye shoma maloom hast ine ke F monasebi entekhab nemikonid. dar in aks ba tavajoh be sorati ke dari F besyar kami dari. Hatman Hatman bayad F ro balaye 16 entekhab mikardi ta omghe meydane behtari dashte bashi. Alan khodet deghat kon bebin joziyat moshakhas nist. elatesham F kam hast. Matlabe dige ine ke dar zamani ke noor ziyadi dari bayad ba ye tasmime jedi bikhiyale asemoon beshi, yani meghdare kami az kadr ro be asemoon bedi ta betooni tanzim nore dorosti dashte bashi. alan yek zede noor shode ke zibayi koohe barfi va koohe sabz ro az beyn borde. movafagha bashi,

ghorbanet
bedrood

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• fabio_ts (12550)
• [2006-05-04 4:45]

A nice and evocative landscape Asana, I like the light effects and the lovely contrast of colors, cloudy blue sky / withe snow / green mountains... excellent!!!

have a nice day,
Fabio.

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• greecelightning (284)
• [2006-05-04 11:55]
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Nice capture. You could easily cut the top half out, since it only shows clouds with no blue color anywhere. The contrasts are good and the shot is quite clear. I touched it up in a workshop - hope you don't mind! Well done!
Taso

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• rabdelnoor (2971)
• [2006-05-04 20:45]
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Hi Asana,
The view is very pleasant, but the picture lacks a better cropping and brighness. I did a workshop for you. I hope you like.

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• siolaw (22701)
• [2006-05-05 3:34]

Hi Asana,
Wonderful landscape, beutiful colors, nice mountain shape... thanks for showing!
Laurent

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• cjmm (4009)
• [2006-05-05 16:07]

Hi Asana,

The landscape you show us is really beautiful, and the image conveys a strong sense of serenity, with that stream coming from the snow capped mountains.

I also like the compostion. I know that it does not fit the common rule of thirds and that other posters suggested some cropping; but I like it very much as it is. I feel that the cloudy sky is a nice balance. (Anyway, one of the reasons why I like photography is that it is a subjective experience).

Only I think that some of the highlights (on the clouds) could benefit from a little less brightness.

Thanks for sharing and kind regards,
Carlos

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• xavshot (48171)
• [2006-05-06 9:05]

Hello,
j'aime beaucoup cette petite touche de lumièere sur ce vert. Je trouve ta photo très bien cadrée et bien composée. Une très belel vue
amicalement
Xavier

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• elihesamian (25819)
• [2006-05-09 15:43]

Asana,

What a wild view and nature !
I love this kind of mountains and weather and you captured and composed very well with a nice and superb colors and contrast,I like also diagonal lines overlapped here,...look at blue here in this stormy cloudy sky !
nicely done Asana,

Best Wishes
M

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• rahul__rahul__ (2250)
• [2006-07-27 18:46]

Hi Aasana
nice picture, I like the view in this a lot, the river is nice and makes these mountains look very massive, the sky is also interesting.
Good job
TFS
Rahul
..later