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jinju 2006-09-21 7:57
Hi Stefi,
I like the idea, theres a bit of a jusxtaposition going. I think the kiss is obviously the centrerpoint of this composition. I would have liked the woman with the carriage to be more to the side of the frame or out if it. I think she is a bit too close to the kissing couple, leaving an unbalanced right side and encroaching on the couple too much, almost overshadowing them. Perhaps without her this would work very nicely as a good off centered romatic photo. A nice shot overall.
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09-21-2006, 05:53 PM
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To jinju: Thank you
Thank you Rafal, the woman with the buggy is my sister-in-law, I could have asked her to pass another time to have a best composition (the couple would not mind, too busy), but I choosed to have a less correct shot but more genuine one.
Thank you again for your interesting and honest comment, bye Stefano 
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