Introspect..
sayeed_rahman
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daddo 2015-06-04 17:01
Salam Sayeed. If you drop "and watch the world go by to the next line, you will get a rhyming stanza (sort of). Nice shot in which the human element is strong due to position, expression and chequered head cover. Regards. Klaudio.
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06-05-2015, 03:00 PM
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To daddo: Limerick
I took your advice and modified the whole thing and now I am close to a limerick. I don't think it will qualify as a limerick, but close
 )Thanks dear friend...great weekend Sayeed 
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