I am in my world ..., a photo from Ile-de-France, North

Photographer's Note

In the station of La Défense, near Paris, after work, waiting for the train back to Paris ...

Some listen to music, some take photos of the ones listening to music and others pretend not having noticed ...

gelor, ManuMay, nunenik, Silke, eleparc ha puntuado esta nota como útil.

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battousai (827) 2007-02-17 11:12

Hi Sylvie,

I like the idea and the composition. The picture is interesting but from a technical point of view it lacks sharpness and a it's a little bit noisy. Another thing is that the gentleman's suit is one big black spot... All the middle tones are lost here...

Anyway - I like the idea!

Best regards

Pawel

michiels (4170) 2007-02-17 11:19

hi Sylvie,

someone dissapeared ... :D
and i didn't see you this morning in Antwerp
funny composition with the publicity and the real man. I can't get rid of the idea that he is choosing which hair he wants :DD
see you, inn

ManuMay (36447) 2007-02-17 12:12

Good shot, we are always hunting for the picture and this is one that show the real ife, catch a moment to show our life.
Well done and see.
TFS
Manuel

nunenik (135) 2007-02-17 12:27

When I saw this in the gallery I thought, "I must send this to Sylvie, let her know about it". And of course it took me a while to read the name at the bottom and see that it says SylFondacci.
Well, at least you've already seen it :)))

It's funny how his head looks almost the same size as the ones on the posters. As though he's one of them, just in a different pose...
Not so analytical this time, but how I sympathize with him! A familiar state of mind :)
Nuné

lestans (17258) 2007-02-17 12:51

Ciao Sylvie!!

it is a funny composition!! In this place it is possible to capture interesting attitudes.. :-))
And funny also how people spend time using MP3 .
Ciao!!

Livia

Cavecanem (2825) 2007-02-17 13:32

Bonsoir Sylvie, bien vu pour le sujet mais j'aime également l'aspect purement photographique de ton cliché, le cadrage 1/3, 2/3 le contraste du costume noir sur l'affiche blanche. De plus le format carré est particulièrement bien choisi.
Bonne soirée : François

Silke (3027) 2007-02-19 19:50

Hi Sylvie
I like the idea but I think I'd be tempted to crop it to just below the middle row of faces: That would actually make it more interesting by keeping the focus where it belongs
TFS
silke

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mdetay (4929) 2007-02-21 4:36