protective hand, a photo from Ile-de-France, North

Photographer's Note

some will recognize this young couple. For those who complained about the lack of colors, i hope this will respond to their need.. shot at the Tang frères dépot.

As suggested by valeria and Bertrand, i cropped a bit the frame on the young couple and added some red color in a ws.. Which one do you like best?

delnaja, nunenik ha puntuado esta nota como útil.

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devimeuxbe (58557) 2007-02-27 5:59

Salut Eric
c'est une belle prise. On aurait pu croire du Furachan, mais c'est Paris et c'est toi.
J'aime bien le regard décidé du protecteur.
La gauche de l'image aurait peu être un peu rognée.
Amicalement
Bertrand

kiwi_explorer (12209) 2007-02-27 6:01

Hi Eric,
Well captured moment ... facial expression and emotions. Perfect timing ... excellent!
Cheers,
Renier

bhima (726) 2007-02-27 6:32

C'est vrai les deuc tourteraux sont photogéniques et le moment que tu as su capter est intéressant mais je regrette dans t acompo la présence d'un bout de ballon bleu à gauche ainsi qu'un manque de contraste à mon sens.

Je t'ai proposé un WS.

Thomas

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vagabondtravels (6511) 2007-02-27 7:04

Hi Eric

Good comp and colors. Very sharp. You have captured the couple expressions excellently. The blue balloon(?) is a bit distracting. Anyhow well done.
Ben

designsoul (17843) 2007-02-27 9:07

This is SO beautiful, Eric! Love the way their eyes look in different directions, but the wonderful love and connection that exist between them. The beautiful hand of the young man protecting the face of his girlfriend is lovely in its blur. Very nice, Eric!
puszi
sasa
PS I would also crop a bit from the left, I think that the WS one is even better!

faubry (35447) 2007-02-27 10:30

décidemment ils semblent vraiment être inquiets..surtout la jeune fille, j aime beaucoup la façon dont il a sa main posée sur ses oreilles sans doute pour le bruit des pétards. moi aussi je préfère le ballon coupé complètement.
à bientôt
bises
francine

bombilla (3406) 2007-02-27 12:19

Okay, now I have no doubts that they are disturbed, and I think I know why. It's that man stalking them with the camera and the big lens! For goodness sake, leave those poor kids alone. Despite the potential (troubling) intrusiveness of the shot, I like it. It's caught a genuine expression -- two of them. Composition is dramatic and strong. I don't think either of the workshops got it. I prefer this one -- the original post. (But I did my own WS as well, just to really dissect this hapless, terrorized couple.) Best, -Hugh

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anes_lc (14968) 2007-02-27 13:34

i just love the feeling that your picture give to me...protection
great shot.
i like also the ws
regards
anes

naxius (16685) 2007-02-27 13:42

dis donc, décidemment ils ne rigolent pas tous les deux...et cette main, très protecteur le garçon, c'est mimi ;o
Une belle image, peut etre plus sensible que celle d'hier. Je préfère.
Alex

RGatward (20108) 2007-02-27 16:02

She looks a bit concerned about being snapped by you. Good subject, and dynamic pose. For the cop, I think I'd have gone even further, cutting out the detail on the left.

Furachan (0) 2007-02-27 17:13

Un autre aspect du meme couple... il a l'air vraiment heroique ce type, un peu dans le style de ce sposters de l'ere maoiste... Elle n'a pas l'air trop confortable parcontre. Bonne capture!
A+
Francis

delnaja (2056) 2007-02-28 2:51

salut Eric,
belle suite... Ce jeune homme est très agréable à regarder et j'aime sa façon de poser sa main sur la fille... Qui te lance un sacré regard en plus ; )
La partie de gauche ne me gêne pas plus que ça...
A+
Fred

brevbrev14 (140) 2007-02-28 3:48

Ciao Eric, bella anche questa!
la mano ha davvero un ruolo di protezione nei confronti della ragazza..
Mi piace molto la posizione del viso del ragazzo e l' esprssione un pò intimidita della ragazza...
Avrei chiuso di più l' inquadratura sui ragazzi..
Dai loro visi si vedono le loro emozioni..
Mi piace!
ciao
Valeria

nunenik (135) 2007-03-01 2:21

You seem to have scared them! :)
What did you say to them that they have these faces?
Ok, but jokes aside it's a great portrait caught in the middle of crowd!
I think this original one is better, no need for ws... The people on the left give it the crowdy feeling it's supposed to have. Personal opinion, though :)
Nuné

zumoduvas (2069) 2007-05-31 8:47