Fresh and Green, a photo from Salamanca, Castilla y Leon

Photographer's Note

Aroma of grass

Until I reclined
in summer's warmth,
aroused by the fragrance
of fresh cut grass,
blades piercing into my flesh;
I didn't believe
I was back home from the hospice --
back stricken
from the conflict
of the surgeon's scalpel:
I started to rise
but the weight of the sun
flaunted my weakness,
Drunkenly, I climbed the hilltop
like a child, wrapped
in the sweet fragrance of grass.

harras2000, ryno ha puntuado esta nota como útil.

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Guluzar (379) 2007-04-16 17:42 [Comment]

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harras2000 (710) 2007-04-16 17:57

Hola!
A nice minimalistic picture!!!! I like the simplicity very much. I am not shure but I think your beautifull picture will be even better with more sharpness of the gras in front, but it doesn't matter much, the atmosphere of a picture is much more important than technical aspects.

Daniel

sergio1 (12152) 2007-04-22 7:56

Hola Cel

Interesante prespectiva y angulo de tiro.

Original y nueva.

Besos

ryno (6869) 2007-04-24 6:42

Hi Cel, I like this composition - an interesting experiment in simplicity, and your note is an excellent accompaniment. A striking image.
Regards,
Ryno

GUYOFF (901) 2007-12-23 8:33

Hi there,

Great pic, I like....Simple and original...Thanks