aisha jr, a photo from Canakkale, Marmara

Photographer's Note

this is another Aisha in Adatepe...

she is the granddaughter of the coffee house owner...

silent and not very smiling again..aisha seems to be a heavy name in our village...

ps. early morning, Aisha opened the door from their house to the coffee shop when I was trying to take some pictures inside..picture was quite blurred..NI and sharpened and did many other things...

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RandomCameraGuy (3071) 2004-08-13 15:08

Very nice. The colours, the way the subjects are divided, and the comp as a whole are excellent. The only thing missing is if only there was an old lady sitting on one of those chairs!

richtersl (3546) 2004-08-13 15:30

This is just a wonderful composition with the rickety steps leading the eye up to where the little girl is standing. The composition without the girl would be equally effective because of its simplicity and clean lines. But it is the little girl, who just makes this photo so exceptional.

Proxilva (2157) 2004-08-13 15:34

aaawhwhw Fusun!!!!
how do you do it? this is truely perfect...

-the girl gives focus
-the pot-of paint under the stairs bring the suprise element
-the chairs make the foreground
-the pots give it a horizontal structure (very important in a square frame)
-the stairs is a perfectly leading to the subject
-and the colors make it come alive...

all at once mmmmwhaaaa not bad ;D
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saparot (1861) 2004-08-13 15:44

Superb catch, irreproachable photo.
One would say a table, a painting full with freshness.
Congratulation.

hdl (7035) 2004-08-13 15:47

Nice, artistic picture. Nice lines and colours too.

elroyie (2750) 2004-08-13 15:58

Great capture, very good picture with wxcellent composition and colours, the composition is very neat, well done!

erthmuffin (1551) 2004-08-13 16:08

very nice composition. this would have been very artisic, almost an abstract, had the girl not opened the door.

maciekda (19895) 2004-08-13 17:23

what a nice image... excellent composition with those three chairs and the girl in the upper corner. great graphism. bravo.

gilad33 (14433) 2004-08-13 17:27

Wonderful composition, beautiful colors, great scene. well, everyting seems to be perfect techniqly.

So now the story with the door opening and the little girl with that shy look. The paint under the stairs, the pots and chairs, all so intriging.

Perfect frame!

CoolDan (2516) 2004-08-13 17:44

Très belle prise Fusun. Les couleurs sont fort jolies et se complètent bien les unes les autres. La position de la fillette ainsi dans l'encadrement de la porte est bien composée. Nice shot.

Cosa (39) 2004-08-13 17:46

Nothing to add. Close to perfect.

avigur_11 (22553) 2004-08-13 17:46

A very nice shot, Fusun. I like the blue wall and the three chairs. The position of the girl is very well selected, and IMO makes this shot very special and interesting.

ste (872) 2004-08-13 17:51

I like the composition, the blue color, the little girl, I like!!

Rinie_Hoff (9340) 2004-08-13 17:56

Wow, Fusun, that row of jugs, and the blue with the three chairs in front of it, and Aisha in the door opening, it's all there. It's really great. I'm afraid I'll have to shove this one into my 'favorite' box. No matter how much I like your B&W pictures, this is so beautiful!

Galeota (10352) 2004-08-13 18:00

Fantastic image. This is filled with symbols. You are an artist.

Isaperez (355) 2004-08-13 19:32

Beautiful composition,congratulations!

janwalt (263) 2004-08-13 21:30

This ia a gorgeous photo! The inanimate objects: the jugs, stairs and chairs, are all perfectly placed, or rather, you have composed this shot perfectly. The girl Aisha and the blue wall just make this shot simply fantastic. Well done.

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dom_inik_m (1717) 2004-08-13 22:21

Well, all's been written before, so I can only add my smiley to this long list of compliments!
Nevertheless, I just created a new theme, Exploring shapes and colours. Would you like to be part of it, Fusun, with this picture?
This invitation may not be quite formal, but we've all got to start somewhere, somehow... ;-)

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lemon_logix (1054) 2004-08-13 23:00

well composed, the colors work very well here. and i would you did a good "recovery" job to the not so perfect photo. You digital darkroom skill is good.

cgrindahl (6113) 2004-08-14 2:34

This is lovely Fusun with the vivid colors, distinctive shapes and fine texture. The three chairs are a delight as well. The little girl appears to be older than her age with that expressionless gaze, as though disapproving of what you are doing. As Gal says, there are many stories that could be told from this rich material. Fine work.

anadai (2687) 2004-08-14 2:52

Great photo Fusun, very well done - .

timotey (119) 2004-08-14 3:16

A very high quality in the composition for this shot ! The centring is perfect takin into account all these details from the chairs, very well contrasted by a deep blue background, the red aligned pots and this little child. This picture's got all the assets we want to bring together at each time we aim with our camera. You did it and it's beautiful !

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Bos (628) 2004-08-14 5:04

Very good, nice composition and striking colours.

Michael_Gan (2776) 2004-08-14 7:00

Speechless... absolutely fantastic picture! The composition is amazing and all elements are in perfect harmony. It feels like the work of a famous painter who created this scene very carefully after hours of relocating the chairs, pots, girl... But you found this spot as it is and made this beautiful picture. This is a favourite!

Hanssie (11022) 2004-08-14 7:10

I saw this picture yesterday already, but was out of points, so now here I am again....
What a beautiful picture, in composition, in fine colours (they're still busy with it, I see...) and details, wonderful done, Fusun !

roshangar (1682) 2004-08-14 7:41

one of the best shot That I have ever seen in TE!I can't add something more,thanks and bravo!

correp00 (474) 2004-08-14 10:53

Very Beautiful, this is art ! Very graphical, good colours and the child so cover the picture by something human. I Like a lot, Bravo.

cmartos (242) 2004-08-14 11:50

A so lovely catch Fusun. I like your composition very, very much. The little girl in the opposed corner to the chairs, the relative tight crop, the various shapes and their simplicity, all contribute to a superb catch. Congratulations!

waskahegan (0) 2004-08-14 13:08

Very nice Fusun, the child looks very good. The picture is quite complete with the chairs, stairs and potery.
Great color combination

Marcie (345) 2004-08-15 1:53

Wonderful composition, Fusun! Colours are so nice, I like the vivid blue, and the pale tone of others. You chose a very good angle to shot, I like very much that the floor has that much part on the bottom of the image. I think she is not very smiley, but she is corious about you, she just a bit shy, very cute little girl. Congrats!

carper (96) 2004-08-15 2:12

Yes Fusun, this is very great,
Fantastic composition, great lines, fantastic colours, this is very good, I like it very much, very good job, with my compliments.

Darren (6823) 2004-08-15 2:21

This is really good Fusun. I don't really have anything to add, but it is a well done, well balanced photo. Without the girl, this would be dull to my eyes, but by having her there it makes all the difference.

ttmountainman (2279) 2004-08-15 7:43

Did you rearrange the pottery urns so that their handles pointed in every direction and did you reposition the chairs equally too??

I love the can of paint and the hammer on the ground...the blue and white is of Adatepe, once Greek and now celebrating those colours at the Olympics!!!

2 points for the crop, frame and the subject being my favourite Adatepe!

summer89 (5422) 2004-08-15 11:25

Hi Fusun,

Great photo this one, the composition it's wonderfull.

Very well done

jrzufferey (7305) 2004-08-15 13:23

Ma chère Fusun, Ta composition est vraiment fantastique,elle me plîat énormément.Tu as su voir ce contraste de couleurs d'abord, ensuite ce contraste des objets, les cruches,l'escalier,les chaises etc.Le sommet pour moi est ce regard de cette jeune enfant,mi-intérogatif, mi-inquiète. Tu es une artiste,c'est très beau Ciao/jr

phi729 (2101) 2004-08-15 16:00

The arrangement and tonality of the colors are superb (vases, wall, staircase - door, chairs). The Framing offers a nice balance between the elements composing this photo. Finally, the little girl reinforces the warmhearted aspect of this composition again. Beautiful notes too. You are an artist, Fusun...

Directly in my favorites.

manerist (415) 2004-08-15 16:25

Great pic! You can tell it is not staged, the little girl adds so much to the appeal!

A-la-N (2025) 2004-08-15 17:00

GREATE COMPO !!!!!!!!!!!

flydragon (0) 2004-08-15 17:27

wowww Funsun
great picure
amazing composition and great color
everything is here to make a good picture
again a good shot ;o)
Simon

jorbidd (25) 2004-08-16 6:55

...the white wall, the pots , the blue wall and the chair, these alone could make up for a very good composition of a picture of an art (when given a nice shot)... its the least that I could suggest. Overall, its Nice shots though.

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koko (1) 2004-08-16 7:15

great composition,color,the pot, the chair,and the girl..

Isabelle (9046) 2004-08-16 21:32

colors are formidable, fusun, as well as composition.
i bow in front of you in deep respect to your work.

kiss

ozgen (72) 2004-08-17 3:44 [Comment]

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pridel (233) 2004-08-17 10:56

Oh Fusun !!! I make feel guilty much, how could am i unforgivable not see your beautiful photograph? It is a very beautiful coloured composition, each thing is in its good place. I agree as for saying as the young girl is the magic thing which transcends this image .
1 000 000 000 smileys
Pascal

Rhiannon (1728) 2004-08-18 9:34

Excellent shot! Great composition, amazing colours. The graphism is wonderful, the diagonal stairs, the chairs and different colours of the wall. The little girl really top this composition, which would have been more than good even without her. She really adds interest to this picture.
Very, very well done!

oochappan (4880) 2004-08-19 18:25

Very strong composition here with the little girl on top left shyly hidden behind darker colors in contrast to the light brillant colors around. TFS

claudiaf (4438) 2004-08-20 16:24 [Comment]

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egmg (345) 2004-08-20 17:17

You know by yourself, that this is a true masterpiece. Counted objects, similar but not identical. Keen interplay of numbers, things, shapes, colours and communicative gaze. All archetypal associations are immediately involved - theatrical scene, scene and staircase of life, door and threshold, those jags giving the connotation of drinking water or wine - life and death liquid. Great shot. Thank you.

joseelias (0) 2004-09-02 8:10

Probably all has been said but I must praise you for this one! The question is that I don't know what to say!!! It's almost too perfect to be real and spontaneous! Fabulous framing, colors and composition.

aznegrao (10316) 2004-09-19 6:34

Ola Fusun!!. Imagens como essa nos fazem amar cada vez mais a fotografia. Me impressionou muito o uso das linhas e na colocação do motivo de forma dinamica. Saudações. Tony.

manny (22032) 2004-10-13 7:54

This is so good....colors, composition, etc. I am green with envy. Beautiful...perfect!!

clodreno (0) 2004-10-13 7:56

a superb image. love it. In my favorite.

bebecam (161) 2004-10-13 8:07

When a picture has too many elements, it can sometimes lose focus, but in yours, everything seem to blend in together - it looks alittle one-dimensional, like a stage backdrop with props, and Aisha is the little actress ;)

michel_r (1118) 2004-11-01 7:15

This is a very impressive picture. Very well divided, great composition, great colours. I like very much.

scalerman (26900) 2005-01-26 21:31

a very Mediterranean compo; brilliant blues, shapes. It's all been said above. I would've missed this one, had it not been featured on the TE opening page.

ninix (957) 2005-01-30 4:33 [Comment]

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Vagabond (5848) 2005-03-13 4:17

A very nice and artistic picture, full of insights. Excellent work. Congratulations ..

YavuzA (357) 2005-03-13 5:05

Müthis bir kompozisyon. Tebrikler!!!

Bojan (1630) 2005-05-12 19:40

very impressive. The colours are beautiful. The composition is perfect. so many great details and a great whole.

recepyuksel (18640) 2005-06-01 13:39

Harika mavi nefis kompozisyon, sevimli bir model ile çok özel bir fotoğraf m. getirmişsiniz. Tebrikler

Albrecht (11283) 2005-06-01 14:03

Hi Fusun
Ashia was there on the right time. Great composition and realy simpl but wonderful chosen POV. The blue colour is wonderful. Great job, greetings Albrecht

hadas (92) 2005-09-06 4:17

I like your composition how you divide the picture with colors and geometric shapes

Hadas

teta5 (1203) 2005-11-02 10:43

Hi,
the composition is really great! the girl, chairs and jugs... it looks fantastic.
Well done. Thanks for sharing,
regards,
AM

suburban (44) 2006-06-14 11:13

very good shot. the colors and the girl as a subject are really interesting.

sohado (17) 2006-06-14 21:01 [Comment]

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Aliza (597) 2006-07-14 1:34

Merhaba,
Ne kadar güzel bir fotograf!
Ellerinize saglik!
Tebrikler!
Aliza.

garageolympo (242) 2006-08-26 3:22

Beautiful image Fusun, so calm and impressive expression with colorful surrounding.

vagabondtravels (6511) 2006-09-12 0:23

Good colors and repetition.
Well done.
Ben

tonikrou (463) 2006-09-14 4:27 [Comment]

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quillo (11858) 2007-02-26 14:50

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Hi fusun, a very finished composition, with good details, an attractive and very agreeable picture for the colors and the light.

Congratulations.

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Regards and see you soon.

pebbles (0) 2007-03-03 13:10

Hello Fusun,

I would like to say to you, that I like your photo very much

kind regards Bea

Mistral (15416) 2007-03-12 16:13

Merhaba Fusun,
excellent beautiful composition!
Your image is perfectly composed.
Well done!
A smile
Luca

iGirl (1223) 2007-03-12 16:36

Nice colors and composition. I love how the space is divided up, very artistic. The girl adds a nice touch of human interest. Great job!
TFS,
Erin

kaptan (1444) 2007-04-13 4:52

Bu sitede gördügüm en iyi kompozisyonlardan biri.HARiKA.Tebrikler.Nezih

rafeek (124) 2007-08-30 0:59

Fantastic subjects- Most of your pictures are relating daily life

All the best

rafeek Manchayil

Uzi (1240) 2009-08-14 6:03

I like the framing here.. this rythm of the chairs, stairs and pitchhers is great here.. and this girl who great complete all pic..
very good job
regards
Iza