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Photographer's Note
I re-did this photo based on Sam's critique for the orginal image. I like this version more because it's easy to read the "No Vacancies" sign, and you still get the closed off feel with the black bars. What do other people think?
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It's tough enough finding housing in the college town of Berkeley. It was even worse during the dotcom times of a few years ago. The sign next to the phone says, "No vacan(c)ies - Don't Bother Mgr."
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Critiques | Translate
sam
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(897) 2002-11-20 18:27
I definitely like this crop better. I don't think you lose any of the atmosphere of the image, and you make the key elements (sign and locked gate) more bold.
mdchachi
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(1612) 2002-11-20 23:29
I agree the tighter crop makes for a more powerful and interesting image.
BobTrips
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(1857) 2002-11-21 12:41
I like this crop a lot more. Concentrates on the subject. (What happened to Sam's original critique?)
Photo Information
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Copyright: Adam Silverman (adam)
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 434 W: 38 N: 32]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif)
(860) - Genre: Lugares
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 1999-05-00
- Categories: Vida cotidiana
- Camera: Canon A2, Fuji Velvia
- Versión de la foto: Final Version, Versión original
- Tema(s): Public Phones [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2002-11-20 17:18
Discussions
- Sam's Original Critique (1)
by adam, last updated 2002-11-21 05:51
